Corrected Animatic Panels - Version 2

I had a little problem when I had finished my first Animatic, I didn't like it. This wasn't the only thing either. Another thing that I was worried about was the actual science of it wasn't correct. Not taking any risks I decided to do it again. You can see my Animatic below in a previous post, but I have only uploaded my Animatic panels for a different one. These Panels are for the Animatic I presented at the Pitch.